My name is Jillian. I go to Saticoy School and this is my life.
My favorite colors are purple and green. Purple because it is the color of a vielot flower. White because it is the color of snow.
My friend’s names are Maddy, Kylie, and Victoria, Maddy is 8, Kylie is 9, and Victoria is 7. My family’s names are Lori, Jack and my dog Bailey. Bailey is almost 7, Lori is my mom and of course Jack is my dad.
My favorite sports are basketball and swimming. Basket ball because my mom put me in this camp to learn how to play basket ball I was nervous at first but after a while I made some new friends and it was really fun the last day because we went onto yhe center of the court to give out awards but I didn't get one.Swimming because when it's really hot outside it feels really good on your skin when you jump in.
In the future I see myself as a basketball player because my coach said I was really good. My academic goals are spelling and reading becauseI don't spell that good and for reading because I can't read when people are talking.
My personal goal is to remember to drink enough water because when I go home it's almost filled. My favorite subjects in school are math, drawing, reading, and coloring because their fun! My teachers made some cool rockets last year. I need to work on spelling, reading, and drawing. THE END JILLIANJ
Reader Feedback Looking good Jillian! Please add some more detail- you are doing GREAT! Your hair look so realistic in your portrait! --Mrs. Geib
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I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib
All About Me School Year Intro
My name is Jillian. I go to Saticoy School and this is my life.
My favorite colors are purple and green. Purple because it is the color of a vielot flower. White because it is the color of snow.
My friend’s names are Maddy, Kylie, and Victoria, Maddy is 8, Kylie is 9, and Victoria is 7. My family’s names are Lori, Jack and my dog Bailey. Bailey is almost 7, Lori is my mom and of course Jack is my dad.
My favorite sports are basketball and swimming. Basket ball because my mom put me in this camp to learn how to play basket ball I was nervous at first but after a while I made some new friends and it was really fun the last day because we went onto yhe center of the court to give out awards but I didn't get one.Swimming because when it's really hot outside it feels really good on your skin when you jump in.
In the future I see myself as a basketball player because my coach said I was really good. My academic goals are spelling and reading becauseI don't spell that good and for reading because I can't read when people are talking.
My personal goal is to remember to drink enough water because when I go home it's almost filled. My favorite subjects in school are math, drawing, reading, and coloring because their fun! My teachers made some cool rockets last year. I need to work on spelling, reading, and drawing. THE END JILLIANJ
Reader Feedback
Looking good Jillian! Please add some more detail- you are doing GREAT! Your hair look so realistic in your portrait! --Mrs. Geib
Students: Give positive feedback/constructive criticism here!
For example,
I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib